For an English language learner, writing using the English language is challenging and it becomes more challenging if you are writing to get a good score in the class.
Here are two of our students at First EDT Learning Center who are both writing to pass their tests.
These written materials are the original work of the students and were not corrected by teachers.
Featured Student #3 Ms. JUNG BYUNG EUN (JOO)
Ms. Joo will soon leave the school for Korea and we certainly know that she will do well in her next endeavor. Here is a proof of the beginning of her success. She wrote an article about an argument whether “Education is the single most important factor in the development of the country” and here’s what she could say about this:
There is a Korean saying, “Knowledge is Power”. This saying emphasizes the importance of learning. We can develop ourselves as human beings; learn what we haven’t known yet. Knowledge gives us opportunities of diverse experiences which help us find a thing that we want to do sincerely.
Through the process like this, humans get to know themselves well. This gives us satisfaction in life. The citizen who goes this process becomes a precious resource of his country.
Education is the best way to obtain knowledge. However, we should not overlook the fair opportunity of learning. If the government hopes for the development of its country, they should provide all the citizens a fair opportunity for education. There should not be discrimination of class with regards to their standing in the society.
Featured Student #4 Ms. YUKI NAKAYAMA (Yuki)
Her name is familiar to you if you have been following my postings; that’s because I already wrote an article about her. In the previous article I mentioned that her progress in Writing was notable.
One day, her proud buddy teacher Vhon approached me and told me how happy he was with the result of Ms. Yuki’s examination. Teacher Vhon has been teaching her Idiomatic Expressions and as part of her exam, she was asked to write a story using the Idioms she had been taught.
A Mother’s Touch
By: Yuki Nakayama
This is a story of a mother and a daughter.
It is up to parents to take care of their children.
The children’s upbringing depends on how they are being raised by their parents. Good upbringing makes good children. By contrast, while bad upbringing creates bad children.
The mother had to bring her daughter up alone because she broke up with her husband after she became pregnant. But once she gave birth to her daughter, she realized how she loves her baby. That, she could do anything for her. Although the daughter did not have her father, she was very happy.
When her daughter was a baby and was sleeping, she used to turn over many times, and also play with a doll. Although she tried to do up the buttons of her clothes, it was difficult for her. Her mother used to help and teach her how to do it up. And then when she was four years old, she could do them up and even filled a glass up with water by herself because of her mother’s teaching. When she was an Elementary student and it was her birthday, her mother prepared to celebrate. Her mother came around to her daughter’s best friend’s houses to give them invitations of the latter’s birthday party; asking them to write a message for her daughter. She prepared special meals, drinks, presents and she blew up a lot of balloons for her daughter. A total of fifteen friends came to the party. When the mother gave all the things away and celebrated, the daughter cried a lot because her mother’s kindness made her happy and gave her very good impressions.
Ten years later, she became a high school student. Fortunately, she could enter a high level school. But it was hard for her. Although she studied hard, she could not catch other students up. But she did not give up and even though she was very tired, she went on studying every day and every night. Her mother always cheers her up. Because of her efforts and her mother’s encouragement, she became an ace in the exam at last.
After graduating in college, she got a job in a famous company. She met a man there who was her senior. He was very kind to her and she worked with him the whole time. Because of always working together, they got attracted to each other. They started going out together and they had a good time. Five years later, they got married.
Now, she is happy and she has her own family. She always tells her mother because of her mother, she is happy now. She always has gratitude to her mother because her mother gives her happiness that she will treasure for the rest of her life.
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